Wednesday, 12 February 2014

Spiders by Connor

This is another fine paragraph from Connor.
It has several good features, including using two correctly punctuated lists, great punctuation and spelling, different sentence starters, and interesting vocabulary.
What a great paragraph Connor!


Some spiders are dangerous and some are deadly. There are 3 names for deadly spider bites named poison, venom and toxic. All spiders have a painful bite. These arachnids travel in four different ways: crawling, jumping, climbing and swimming. Creatures like these spin webs to catch their prey.
By Connor

2 comments:

  1. wonderful writing keep up

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